Uncanny valley=things that aren’t normal almost getting it right
Third person limited view
Limited explanations
Rot, mold, damage, age, static, flickering, especially in places it shouldn’t be
Limited sights for your mc -blindness, darkness, fog, refuse
Real consequences
Being alone -the more people there are, the less scary it is
Intimate knowledge, but only on one side
I don’t know I just write scary things but I don’t know what I’m doing.
Rule of Thumb: your reader’s imagination will scare them more than anything you could ever write. You don’t have to offer a perfectly concrete explanation for everything at the end. In fact, doing so may detract from your story.
As a feminist, seeing Cate Blanchett in this sort of outfit in her late 40s brings me joy, because most movies would take her age as automatically excluding her from anything even slightly sexy.
As a gay, seeing Cate Blanchett in this outfit renders me incapable of thought and speech.
Hela Gay
@hillnerd just ‘cause I know you have hearteyes for Cate.
And yes, I’m in agreement. A woman in her late 40s getting this kind of outfit – and while pretty objectifying… it’s also hella.
Convincing people that all anime isn’t just perversion and fan service is hard when Netflix is pushing devilman crybaby and kakegurui and you turn around and I’m battling a huge penis in persona 5